Setting Sail

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Setting Sail

After a long Birthday, complete with a tofu Cake, Zeb gets some needed shut-eye. The above comic is my attempt at a dream sequence. I think that the extra time that I spent in the sketching phases has paid off. I'm still working with trying to make the colors "pop" a bit more, but overall, I think I am improving.

I am realizing that the one way to make the comic better, aside from a few minor technological upgrades, is sketching. The more time I spend on fleshing out my idea in a sketch, the more pay off I will have in the final result. For the story element, as of now, I have no idea how this dream will turn out. Suggestions?